wow i like this page.. so awesome.
I love the kitchen panel! One flaw that I noticed was how she's still in pyjama's and the next panel, fully clothed. Nothing huge, but it did come to my attention (I'm not looking for faults). Anyway, can't wait to read the rest - the drawings are fantastic!
She wears her pajamas in all panels, but yeah, she does lose her robe from panel 3 to 4... Good catch! I've had people preview my comics sometimes before I start inking them so they can catch any mistakes I might have missed - and there's often a bunch of them But don't feel bad for pointing out faults! It's the only way I'll learn.